The Treasure of the Great Wall
Wai Laa
n 1900’s England, there was a man who was fat, had brown hair and small brown eyes. He was born in an
explorer family. He called Peter Irwin. One day, he found a letter in his grandpa’s diary.
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A yellow envelope contained a small paper. Some words were in the small paper, “There was a
sure under the Great Wall in Beijing.”
Peter was very excited. He took the letter and gave it to his best friend, Jones Dorman. He was tall,
clever, strong, had blue eyes and red hair. Peter wanted to find the treasure together with Jones. Jones couldn’t
feel believable but he still trusted his friend. Then they went to China by plane.
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There was a rich man who was Jones‘s boss. He overheard the news when Peter told Jones about the letter.
He wanted to get the treasure own, so he wanted to kill Peter and Jones.
They ran to the Great Wall. It was quite difficult to find the treasure as the Great Wall was very long.
Fortunately, they found the treasure that was in the highest part of the Great Wall marked with red “x”. The rich
man followed them. They got the treasure box and opened it. There was nothing in the box. Suddenly, the
weather turned bad and rainy. Souls came out. An old man stood in front of Jones and said, “You got the hints.”
Jones surprised but he didn’t understand what the hints were. The old man and the souls disappeared then the
weather became sunny. The rich man saw all the things, he was afraid and he ran away very soon.
A black hole suddenly appeared on the ground. Jones and Peter were trapped back to the Qin Dynasty. They
saw many soldiers and armies. Many workers were building the Great Wall. They were hardworking but tired.
Some soldiers hit the workers. They were hurt. Then the black hole appeared again on the ground, they were
trapped again and saw the Great Wall was built and an old man stood at the top of the Great Wall who put the
treasure box. Jones wanted to ask the old man what was he put into the treasure box but the old man disappeared
as smoke soon.
Finally, the black hole appeared and they were trapped. They were in 1900 years again. They stayed on the
Great Wall. They saw the treasure box and tried to open it again. Woo…… an enormous skull bone of dragon
and a silk sheet were inside the box. Some words were on the sheet, “The dragon is brave and strong. We need
to group together. Don’t be selfish or greedy. Our country will go from strength to strength – China.” That was
the treasure of the Great Wall and also the treasure of China. At last, Jones and Peter went back to England at
dawn without any treasure.
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